ok I relly haven't seen one that was made like this, I really do think that this shoukld be revized a bit, why is the girl laying on a piece a nothing, what is the mood the feel? what is her backround?? whats in the back is she outside or in?? Is she waiting for someone or is she just sitting around, what if someone was watching her?? how would the viewers view this would they think, oh I just wasted my time on this or do you think that they enjoy seeing a girl around in her bra and undies, is this how you title every girl?? I hope this helps you!!
This is my character Millenia portrayed as a playboy bunny. I named it Miss December because the backdrop is in a winter wonderland. Other than that I'm not quite sure what you're looking for?